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By: Paul Steffan Jones AKA
Posted in: Poetry

He came from a lost village

he couldn’t remember which one

or how it came to be missing

as it was so long ago

perhaps it had been a frowned

drowned sort of place

or a bulldozed overdosed one

somewhere that wouldn’t be missed

he had been wet behind the ears

but soon fitted in with

the new strangers

although they spoke differently

and seemed disinterested

in anything that was other

his parents never talked about

their origins

and stayed that way until the end

those nights when he could sleep

deep in the cosy burrow of forgetting

he dreamt of a place

that smiled

that worked

that knew its history

what he couldn’t know

was that everyone else

was dreaming

of returning to somewhere

they had never been

he got over it

there had been many villages

lost for various reasons

that’s the way it was

people becoming unwitting

pieces on a giant chess board

that used to be their country

Thomas Jones
04/07/18 11:15:04PM @thomas-jones:

Cantre’r Gwaelod - or any homeland lost or mislaid, or taken from you. Apparent acceptance and indifference may be used as a protective shield in order to preserve a private and personal  interpretation of what has been lost.

Myth and legend are powerful tools in the forging of community identity but those within communities also need to validate their individuality as members. The creation of a personal narrative that, while unique, is a reflection of and contribution to the society in which it is formed is often the means. In this manner are myths and legends adopted, personalized, reiterated and disseminated often returning in a fresh guise for succeeding generations. Stories are mutable, narrative allows for extemporization and expansion, the fleshing out of an original in order to establish a freshly relevant dynamic.

The world is extraordinary we in comparison are ordinary. Myth and legend in their way continually relate this. They are reminders and warnings from our past selves concerning the reality and nature of our fragile human existence on an inhumanly indifferent planet.

Poetry at its best contains all this - Otherlander ***** (5 stars)!


Paul Steffan Jones AKA
04/08/18 11:28:31PM @paul-steffan-jones2:

Thanks Thomas. 

Cantre'r Gwaelod was one the stories of my youth on the coast of Ceredigion.  As a child, I was advised to listen out for the bells of that lost land. I never heard them but kept the story in my heart, in my mind.