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On The Banks of Lightning River
A hill river in spate
in its pomp
its waterfalls are thunder
to its name
the call and response
of precipitation and gradient
the fall they call “snow”
is a curtain of moving water
frothing and seeming to boil
the torrent
and the history
of the torrent
and all its previous versions
various machinations
volumes speeds and force
have left on the bank
smoothed stones
the size and shapes
of loaves of bread
and cakes
roots are exposed
hard
obdurate
obstinate
the healthy brown bones
of the skeleton trees
fringing the foam
this water course flows underground
swallowed by a wide mouthed cave
we pause and peer
at the vanishing point
our boots lapped by the shallows
the air loaded with
the incense of spray
and someone else’s cannabis smoke
...
Diolch yn fawr Paul Ystradfellte was one of my favourite walking areas back in the day. Your poem evokes the atmosphere of the place better than a picture imho
Many thanks Ceri. I am glad I managed to do some small justice to the majesty of that landscape.